Deanna
7/17/2017
12:27:16 PM | |  | |
Ruth,
Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I am BEYOND excited that you've taken this step and have found such a wonderful person (who in his own way is already helping our community) to reach out to!!! I will also be praying that Mr Caudwell is supportive of the He Cures All Foundation and their wonderful commitment to serve the toxic disease community!!!
I think your letter is fantastic and I do have the following correction/suggestions to contribute.
In the 2nd paragraph the word organization should be corrected to have a z vs an s.
In the 5th paragraph I would like to see more info about the He Cures All Foundation shared here. Our hope is that Mr Caudwell visits the website but we would also like to give him enough information in this letter that he can't help but make a powerful choice to do so!!
Perhaps after where you say exists purely.... you can add, to educate, counsel and to provide subsidized access to high quality nutritional support, for people who otherwise would not be able to afford it. 93% of all donations go directly to the recipients in need.
In the 6th paragraph I would add tax deductible before the word donation.
Your letter could MOST definitely be sent as is!! These are merely suggestions that I hope might make it a little more impactful to Mr Caudwell but again sending it is what is MOST important!!!
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for stepping up and truly trying to make a difference AND for all you have and continue to contribute to this website!!!! Without you, my friend I would NOT be where I am today!!!!!
God Bless you, today and always!!!!
Love, Peace & MANY Prayers!!!!
Deanna |
